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GrowingDark
Minauros
Joined: July 2011 Posts: 45 Location: The Middle of Frickin' Nowhere, Wyoming Gender:
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 Poem: January Starts
Woe to the joys of a new year Blindly fumbling my way through the streets Through the unknown darkness that I fear Until the ground I cannot see drops from under my feet
I thought a new year was supposed to free I pull my hood up as it rains There is no hope of freedom that I can see Just another year of mistakes to add to my chains
My soul despairs Forced to dwell in the past year I've gotten used to the fact that life isn't fair My hope of deliverance is nowhere near
Oh, Unknown Tomorrow What will you bring? I watch as my mistakes continue to grow I wish there was a way to end my suffering
Always haunted by my past wrongs Unable to make them leave To my troubled mind they sing sorrowful songs Through my doubtful mind they weave
The future fills me with dread The past pains me to the core I spend the present in my bed Trying to think of this life no more,
Think of this life no more!
_________________ "The boundaries which divide Life from Death are at best shadowy and vague. Who shall say where the one ends, and where the other begins?"
~ Edgar Allen Poe
Goth name: Dakquan Doomcynic Courtesy of Nephele
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| Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:57 pm |
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Lachrymose
Cania
Joined: July 2009 Posts: 1089 Location: Zombietown, PA. Gender:
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 Re: Poem: January Starts
Yep, that's goth poetry!
Good deal.
_________________ Ahhh...I get to stay inside.
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| Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:48 pm |
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Goth-Ninja
Malbolge
Joined: July 2010 Posts: 274 Gender:
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 Re: Poem: January Starts
I like it. Good rhyme scheme, easy to follow.
_________________ Anything offensive I may or may not have said in the above text is probably sarcasm. Us angsty dwellers of the darkest dark of the night's darkest dark tend to be like that. Signed- Lord Achilles Majick Wellwisp
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| Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:51 pm |
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GrowingDark
Minauros
Joined: July 2011 Posts: 45 Location: The Middle of Frickin' Nowhere, Wyoming Gender:
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 Re: Poem: January Starts
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah, I know, its pretty cliche and stereotypical, but hey, you have to start somewhere right? Plus it's an accurate depiction of my feelings at the time.
_________________ "The boundaries which divide Life from Death are at best shadowy and vague. Who shall say where the one ends, and where the other begins?"
~ Edgar Allen Poe
Goth name: Dakquan Doomcynic Courtesy of Nephele
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| Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:49 pm |
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